As a student, your main focus is enjoying your study. When you focus on the right things, you will be easily to do it! Nowadays, most of the students are losing their main focus. They spend their important time on playing computer’s games. Some of the scientist and even the Bill Gates said that “A person who play more than 1hour computer, he or she should rest for 30minutes”. This word let us know that computer will cause a person tired, this is the reason that cause students tired in class. The way to stay awake in class is students should discipline themselves in their personal life and not to spend time in playing computer’s games for whole days.
Moreover, students should use time wisely and not to spend their time overnight in doing nonsense things. For example: going pub with friends, going Cyber Café and etc. It will only cause them to be sleepy. For a student, you should have 8 hour sleep per day. When you have enough sleep, you won’t feel tired and heavy during the class. It not only helps you to stay awake but also give you a healthy lifestyle and your emotion will be stable too. For God has created that day is for work, night is for rest. These things no one can be denied.
Before attending the class, students can have some nap. After the nap, students will be refreshing; their mind will be sharp during the class. It not only helps the students to stay awake in class but also will help them to focus more in class. When students easily catches up what the lecturer teach in class, they won’t feel sleepy and have excitement to learn more! During the class, if the students still feel sleepy, he or she should take some rest. For example: students can go for toilet to wash their face to refresh themselves.
In conclusion, students should not only study hard but also has to plan wisely in their daily life. It not only helps students to stay awake in class but also will give them a happy and healthy lifestyle! :)
Is this student asleep or awake? (O_o)
Dearest Edward,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the tips; hope all the students can read it :P hehe The essay is good with each step being explained and well supported ^^ Well done! Not many grammar errors too ^^ Keep up your effort...
However, since none of us are perfect, there are a few things I would like to bring to your attention ya :):
1.Thesis statement cannot be in the form of a question ya. It must be a statement, for example: students must follow 3 steps in order to stay awake in class.
2. Most of the students are facing sleepiness in class..~ Most of the students feel sleepy in class~ because sleepiness is not something that can be faced ya ^^
3. As a student, your main focus is enjoying your study.~ As a student, your main focus is TO ENJOY your study/ lessons.
4. not to spend time in playing computer’s games for whole days.~ for whole days should be for the entire day or for many hours in a day.
5. After the nap, students will be refreshing; hehe we did this in class just now, after the nap, the students will be refreshed which means that they are the receiver of the feeling :)
6. The first main idea and second main idea are quite similar, if you can include the PC game playing all into ONE paragraph, the next paragraph can be about something different :) the essay must be 3 distinctive main ideas ya :)
Continue improving ya but don't worry, just minor errors :) Your points are all valid :)
Luv,
Ms Jasline