The first day I attend the class, in my mind think that the classes that I attend are friendly but this is not what I thought! Its make me very upset. I am a slow learner; I need someone to guide me in class. They not only do not teach me and even look down on me! This reason makes me so down in my spirit and I try to skip the classes as possible as I can.
Moreover, I am taking foundation in management. One of the important subjects is accounting, I was so stress because of my accounting lecturer. This subject needs to do a lot of exercise for us to understand it, but the lecturer does not give much. Not only this, the lecturer only base on the text book to explain it and the text book does not provide many details. Lecturer should have some creative way to explain it such as giving some current situation that the world facing or give more example which can found it from reference book.
When come to 2pm classes, it will be my most sleepiest time for me. As a normal or healthy person, we have lunch at 12pm. Most of the people will feel sleepy after the luch, this is because our stomach is working to digest the food and sadly to say that I am one of the kind too. My spirit and my body are fighting, because of my spirit try to catch up what the lecturer is given but my body is weak. It is very suffering during that hour. One of the days, I accidently felt asleep in the class! I feel ashame and detest the class which I attended. It is because of the lecturer scolded me in front of my classmates without questioning the reasons.
Lastly, I thought I could able to understand and accept what my friends experience but I could not. This circumstance is beyond my imagination and I hope that in the future, I will not face the same circumstances that I having now. If I still face the same circumstances, I wish I can overcome it!
*This is not the real story, I love every classes that I attended and I want to thank God for that!*
Accounting <3
Dearest Edward :P,
ReplyDeletehehe I know it's not a true story ya ^^ we just want to see your ability to support what you said with examples and you did it well! ^^ and I enjoyed reading it :P
There are however no thesis statement ya...A thesis is crucial as it shows us what the entire essay is about and how you have arranged the main idea. For this essay, the thesis should be: Now I understand why my friends hated certain class, I also struggle to like classes that do not meet my expectation, have bad lecturers and are conducted during unsuitable time.
There are some minor errors:
1. When I still in secondary school` MISSING VERB ~ when I was still...
2. I wonder that how come most of my friends hate to attend some classes~ should be I wondered why some of my friends did not like to attend...
3.Most of the people will feel sleepy after the luch~ spelling error for lunch :P
4. I will not face the same circumstances that I having now~ i AM having now...
Continue writing ya ^^ I am so happy with the positive attitude and spirit you have shown in class ^^ Good effort :)
Luv,
Ms Jasline